Comments on: Chapter 7, Page 34

By: Borg

Borg — Mon, 24 Jun 2019 19:23:45 +0000

And now time for eavesdropping is over.

By: Solanuma

Solanuma — Mon, 18 Feb 2019 23:33:02 +0000

In reply to Sarah. Yes she knows, Al asked her right after she pulled him out of the water.

By: Emma

Emma — Sun, 17 Feb 2019 16:44:29 +0000

In reply to Dermot. Oh my, very interesting. Yeah. Maybe Tsade contacted her and went, 'Can you retrieve this thing for us?'

By: Zuzi

Zuzi — Fri, 15 Feb 2019 20:59:21 +0000

I think an interesting thing to consider is that for Al, this whole arguement/conversation between him and Brendan is still pretty fresh
Brendan has had (presumably) decades to process and think about their relationship while Al is still reeling from the blow-up so maybe that’s why he can’t see their future together until he goes through his own healing process

By: Guest

Guest — Fri, 15 Feb 2019 08:08:07 +0000

THEY’RE SO CUTE! Look at you guys, being adults and taking responsibility for your behavior and talking things out. Look at that affection, you’re wonderful.

By: Clio

Clio — Thu, 14 Feb 2019 00:07:36 +0000

I honestly think (because Sulla is a perceptive, aware and intelligent young lady) that she is aware she is Al’s “daughter,” in the literal sense. What I think she is surprised at is the nature of Al’s and Brendan’s relationship. Not sure how she will process that, but I hope she realizes that this just expands her family for the better. As for Al, come on, man! If you recognize Sulla for the person she is, get over yourself and don’t repeat the same mistake from before, where your refusal to accept yourself as a gay man cost you and Brendan precious time in your relationship! You are a gruff, down-to-earth, honest, loyal, gay, sentient non-biological man, who has a man and a daughter that loves you. Embrace that fact, so you can all get on with your lives and figure out who gave you a second chance so you can thank them!

By: Sarah

Sarah — Wed, 13 Feb 2019 19:36:26 +0000

Does Sulla know that she was made out of a copy of Als mind? Because she’s gonna quickly put two and two together and the conclusion is gonna make her relationship with Brendan very awkward.

By: Dermot

Dermot — Wed, 13 Feb 2019 04:10:13 +0000

I still suspect that it even if Sulla wasn’t the one who brought Al back, that she was at least in on it or set it into motion. She was probably the one who took the knife that Al woke up with at the beginning of the story. This may all have been intended as a parent trap.

By: Ray Radlein

Ray Radlein — Tue, 12 Feb 2019 23:48:30 +0000

In reply to CFT. That's kind of my assumption here, too.

By: Judy

Judy — Tue, 12 Feb 2019 23:37:41 +0000

I’m super happy to finally see the hopeful, vulnerable Brendan coming through again. He’s been very different in the present day, but very realistically aged in the heart and in the mind. I keep forgetting that Sulla doesn’t even really know who she is in relation to Al, so that seems more pressing to me than her seeing/hearing something intimate between them.