Comments on: Chapter 4, Page 2

By: masic88

masic88 — Sun, 02 Mar 2014 09:14:50 +0000

In reply to Sanbai. . . .but that won't be for quite a long while!

By: Ginny

Ginny — Sun, 02 Mar 2014 01:37:08 +0000

ACK I just read the whole thing in two hours and I’m so sad there’s not more! This is a masterpiece. The characters are so believable and beautiful and I love them SO MUCH <33333 You are doing an amazing job, Blue

By: Jasmine P

Jasmine P — Fri, 28 Feb 2014 05:26:11 +0000

I’d like to believe that Brendon’s sleepy mumbles are even part ‘Al, I miss you’. The ‘Al, I’ part is easy enough to see, but what else is he thinking….

I like this start to the chapter, slowly taking it’s time to set things up. It’s nice.

By: Sanbai

Sanbai — Fri, 28 Feb 2014 04:56:35 +0000

In reply to masic88. You are right. This great misdeed needs to be rectified...

By: Pearle

Pearle — Fri, 28 Feb 2014 03:41:55 +0000

He looks younger without his glasses.

By: masic88

masic88 — Thu, 27 Feb 2014 22:53:00 +0000

Brendan, also, sleeps. of course, the daring duo do not sleep together. this disturbs me.

By: Dengarde

Dengarde — Thu, 27 Feb 2014 18:13:30 +0000

Sleeping people are so cuuuute <3

By: davysperbs

davysperbs — Thu, 27 Feb 2014 18:06:04 +0000

I was right. Now it looks like we’re going to see what Sulla is doing.