Comments on: Chapter 4, End

By: yves.

yves. — Fri, 12 Jul 2019 07:02:15 +0000

In reply to V.

Admittedly I forgot about comments but I just wanted to let you know that I have been DYING to read this. I read the entirety of Volume 1 in two nights after seeing it rec’d as a “non-traditional family structure” (yeah… I’ll bet), immediately knew I had to keep going, and then just binged the entirety of Chapter 4 today… which marks Day 3 of reading your work. It’s just incredible; absolutely amazing.

And I just looked up this quote and that story was also amazing! Thank you so much for bringing your work out into the world; it’s unbelievably valuable. Definitely following this story, both online and in print. Best of luck with further writing + publishing!

Now, to go do my own writing and hopefully leave this as a reward for when I’m done with edits…

By: fennel

fennel — Sun, 28 Feb 2016 16:43:09 +0000

Oooh what a roller coaster of a chapter this was :) looking forward to the next !

By: Mal

Mal — Wed, 24 Feb 2016 01:59:13 +0000

Originally I thought this was going to a story that contrasts classic SF-worldbuilding with a low-key story of a family reforming and finding their identities.

I feel like the last few pages are going “hahahaha low-key, nope!”.

Looking forward to what you have planned.

By: Se

Se — Wed, 24 Feb 2016 01:36:35 +0000

Oh no, Sulla! I hope she learns what the bear does in the story, and finds her nice warm cave (er, in this case meaning her way of accepting who she is; she shouldn’t hide in a cave!). (And as my heart breaks in the next segment; I’ll just keep reminding myself of how Ty picked up Sulla’s things.)

“The truth is he was not a silly man…and he was not a silly bear, either.”

By: Dotcom

Dotcom — Tue, 23 Feb 2016 14:02:21 +0000

In reply to Dotcom. Because when you think about it... The bear secretly integrated into human society—and when he wanted people to see where he came from and what he was they couldn't believe it.

By: Dotcom

Dotcom — Tue, 23 Feb 2016 14:00:33 +0000

In reply to Polaris. Or is it: “Thank you for showing me,” her friends said. “You can’t be a robot. Robots socialize with robots. They never hang out with teenage girls and that’s where you are, hanging out with teenage girls. So how can you be a robot?”

By: Rourkie

Rourkie — Tue, 23 Feb 2016 06:51:43 +0000

Always look forward to reading new updates. Thank you for all the hard work you put into this comic!

By: Jess

Jess — Tue, 23 Feb 2016 04:13:54 +0000

In reply to jak. I believe it is set in Minneapolis/St. Paul, Minnesota

By: Alex

Alex — Mon, 22 Feb 2016 21:05:27 +0000

I love The Bear That Wasn’t! Can’t wait to see what’s next!

By: Polaris

Polaris — Mon, 22 Feb 2016 19:29:17 +0000

“Thank you for showing me,” the public said. “You can’t be a girl. Girls stay on the ground. They never soar through the air and that’s where you are, in the air. So how can you be a girl?”