Comments on: Chapter 3, Page 4

By: Glennnnn

Glennnnn — Fri, 15 Mar 2013 13:36:38 +0000

Ditto the above comment by dredogastusf !
(Except for one little thing: the layout is such that each time a new page comes up it has to be centered (again!) in the browser-window. It would add to the sense of continuity to have a smooth transition from one page to the next rather than have to adjust its placement.)
-I’m sorry, but this is due to your gigantic banner at the top. If it was a narrower version of what you have now then each new page might come up in the same place on the moniter.

By: CFT70

CFT70 — Fri, 15 Mar 2013 06:33:46 +0000

Al might have more problems going on than just cultureshock. Whoever brought about his ressurection may not have pefected the process and Al might be deteriorating in some way… positronic cascade failure like Data’s daughter Lal perhaps.

By: FANG1RLF33L5

FANG1RLF33L5 — Wed, 13 Mar 2013 04:26:36 +0000

And Al just keeps surprising me
the poor dear

By: masic88

masic88 — Tue, 12 Mar 2013 10:00:59 +0000

In reply to Nightsbridge. i still wish to theorize that al was precisely like that, even when he was alive ... only, he has to deal with one extra wrinkle now

By: dredogastusf

dredogastusf — Sat, 09 Mar 2013 16:06:47 +0000

In reply to dredogastusf.

On reflection…heh, heh… Do check out Ben’s current work DERELICT http://derelictcomic.com/. The post-apocolypse is done justice in M. Fleuter’s current project.
There are monsters, but with hearts and minds. There is a lone survivor, who gets the shakes when death is near. There are renascent human cultures, who seem to have good and bad qualities.
And did I mention fantastic art and composition? Now I have.
Check it out friends.

By: Dotcom

Dotcom — Thu, 07 Mar 2013 17:56:56 +0000

In reply to ladyjeran. Then there's the whole thing with him being re-animated from the dead into a releastically human robot body. If he has any living relatives/friends he left behind, I'm sure he has a world of questions, too. Pretty heavy stuff!

By: masic88

masic88 — Thu, 07 Mar 2013 07:12:31 +0000

In reply to masic88. having an ability to go back and edit a submission would be quite divine, m'lady a "rewind button" if you will

By: dredogastusf

dredogastusf — Wed, 06 Mar 2013 22:43:57 +0000

Ben Fleuter at DERELICT posted a synopsis and reccomendation for O HUMAN STAR.
This is an excellent work M.Delliquanti. You are doing a top notch job of slowly, revealling this brave new world. I have book marked your story and will eagerly follow.

By: Blue

Blue — Wed, 06 Mar 2013 16:54:16 +0000

In reply to masic88. Hey there, Blue here. Is there anything specific I can do to make the comment system better or easier to use?

By: masic88

masic88 — Wed, 06 Mar 2013 04:41:58 +0000

In reply to masic88. (i wonder if blue might consider switching to an alternate comment system?)