Comments on: Chapter 3, Page 17

By: Amelie W

Amelie W — Wed, 01 Jun 2022 07:20:20 +0000

Feels bad. As readers, we know Al is a living mess of frustrations due to (spoilers) that he can’t even acknowledge to himself yet and it’s easy to understand his whole. . .attitude. But then you see a neutral character’s perspective and realize they just see a hyuuuge jerk who jerks at, like, a professional level. He probably doesn’t even understand how much it’s costing him, how much he’s not able to accomplish of the things he wants to do because nobody can actually stand being near him. Because they won’t even tell him to his face.

By: Rosie

Rosie — Sun, 28 Jul 2013 13:30:45 +0000

In reply to masic88. NEVERRRRRRRRR!!!! no but seriously, it's been stated that they were both planning on brendan bringing al back, so probably not poison?

By: Darca

Darca — Sat, 20 Apr 2013 10:49:58 +0000

I read this story for some time and I must say that I’m totally mesmerised by it. The creations of characters as well as drawings and emotions you portray in it are just outstanding. I wait for each page with anticipation and it never cease to amaze me how much feelings you put there. I just love your work.

By: Mike

Mike — Sat, 20 Apr 2013 08:30:53 +0000

Loving the series so far. I can see myself a little in both Al and Brendan. Still think Al is my favorite of the two, though.

One minor artistic quibble, the audience looks a bit like billowing smoke to me, rather than a collection of people…

By: Rosie

Rosie — Sat, 20 Apr 2013 02:29:41 +0000

In reply to mrerik. Wait, how'd you calculate that?

By: masic88

masic88 — Fri, 19 Apr 2013 15:00:51 +0000

In reply to Blue.

:-(

i was kinda confused when my comment didn’t ever show up, even after i’d refreshed this page over and over

´had been surfing on my phone, at the time, you see; ´was afeared something was wrong with m’device…..

i didn’t know you were getting spammed, bloo. . . . .

By: Blue

Blue — Fri, 19 Apr 2013 12:21:48 +0000

In reply to masic88.

I noticed you tried submitting this comment a couple of times – sorry about that! I’ve had to beef up my spam filter recently, and sometimes legit comments slip in there. If you are a regular commenter, rest assured that I look through all of my spam before I delete it, so if you posted something and it didn’t show up, just be patient. Thanks as always for reading!

By: the colour of dissschaaaaaair!

the colour of dissschaaaaaair! — Fri, 19 Apr 2013 08:31:45 +0000

I JUST STARTED READING TODAY OMG THIS IS THE BEST THING I’VE READ ALL WEEK IT SERIOUSLY MADE MY DAY BRENDAN AND AL ARE SUCH FUN CHARACTERS I LOVE WATCHING THEM INTERACT

By: mrerik

mrerik — Fri, 19 Apr 2013 04:32:40 +0000

In reply to Rosie.

Well, for the sculpture to cycle through each of its possible permutations would take 37 times longer than the expected lifespan of the universe… so, yeah…

By: Ken

Ken — Fri, 19 Apr 2013 03:52:22 +0000

Aaand, the feeling’s mutual. I wonder how she’ll react when she meets Al now